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ORIGINAL |
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cathedral of Saint Gatien is a compact late Gothic
creation - the first cathedral in France to have
cupolas topping the towers instead of spires. Inside
are some beautiful stained-glass windows dating from
the 12th century. Look for the window in the choir
that shows Tours' favourite saint and fourth-century
bishop - Martin - exorcising a demon. |
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The compact, late-Gothic
Saint Gatien, is France's first cathedral with
cupolas, not spires, crowning its towers.
Beautiful 12th century stained-glass adorns the interior, and a
choir window depicts
4th-century Bishop-Saint Martin, Tours' favorite,
exorcising a demon. |
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Excerpt from
The Telegraph - UK |
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